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Eromyna
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since 2002-11-29
Posts 306
Pheonix, AZ, USA

0 posted 2003-05-07 12:48 PM



You can wake
So you believe
drifting in your waking dreams
dreaming twisted fantasies
like nightmarish manageries
Breaking buildings at the seams
to see
inside the industry
to see
the big machinery
that complicates your greater scheme

I break
too frail to meet your fate
I stumble
stricken out of place
I fail to keep the frantic pace
But you refuse to give me space
Find another to replace
my vacant
star-struck
carapace

Just tears
just blood and anguish
Shame
Just dreams, or nightmares
gone away
Just someone else's yesterdays
which you would gladly let decay
unconscious of the price you pay

"I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation."

© Copyright 2003 Shay D. - All Rights Reserved
Cpat Hair
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Member Patricius
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793

1 posted 2003-05-07 07:47 AM


this one... seems to bleed

some anger some angst some depression...


Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
2 posted 2003-05-08 07:08 AM


Good write....
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


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