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Black Swan
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since 2003-02-05
Posts 165
on the moon

0 posted 2003-04-14 01:00 AM


Fermented fruit
sacred moves
illusive freedom
make me crave it

I find that taking
more and more and more
breeds hate
when you have to much
of a good thing
then give some of it to me

Sorrowful slate
melodic shame
contemplated
too long
patience aided
by being strong

...and when he wants
more and more and more
i'll borrow some
from next door
when you've got too much
of a good thing
you have to share some more
with me baby

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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
1 posted 2003-04-14 02:57 AM


liked this...can't say why exactly, but it's good
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