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Patricia
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since 2003-04-06
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0 posted 2003-04-13 01:58 PM


Righting our wrongs and wrongs done unto with
mere words.
Extinguishing our soul fires with only the fluid ink of our pens.
Living our cherished moments in expressions unfolding on paper.
Evaluating our life's lessons and sharing them in original verses.
Acknowledging our God, our angels, ourself with written thought.
Soothing our weariness and frustation with steadiness of hand.
Embracing our gift to uplift and inspire those accepting our art.

[This message has been edited by Patricia (04-13-2003 02:01 PM).]

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Aenimal
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1 posted 2003-04-13 03:32 PM


Beautiful write and legible too! How Pharmicist's decipher my Dr.s writing I'll never know I think they just take a guess or give you placebo...Ok I seriously need to lie down now..
regards2you
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since 2002-10-01
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2 posted 2003-04-13 03:50 PM




Pat,

I really like this. There are too many good lines to quote without copying this entire poem here.

You captured the acrostic word with the meaning in each line very well.

Enjoyed this greatly,

Hugs to you, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2003-04-13 07:30 PM



A most wonderful release, Patricia...ever since I returned to writing in earnest, I sleep the most blessed of sleeps, and dream the most colorful dreams...

it is indeed a blessing!

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