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vandana
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0 posted 2003-04-12 07:27 PM


You tell me the things
I ever wanted to hear
You tell me
How deep our love Is
You tell
me everything
You tell me
How you fell for me
you tell me
everything
you say you love me
And I believe It all
I can hear whispers calling
From the seashore
listen to those ecohes of love
Far far away
From the mountains
I can hear
you tell me
The words
I ever wanted to hear
You tell me
You tell me everything.......

[This message has been edited by vandana (04-12-2003 07:28 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-04-12 08:56 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, and may your deserving heart always hold true this love and may love never hide a thing from you! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, I'm glad you decided to post this vintage gem, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

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2 posted 2003-04-12 09:22 PM


Very pretty.  Sounds like a very innocent poem.

Jesus lives in my heart!
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3 posted 2003-04-12 09:24 PM


I hope you always hear the words that you want to hear ~ and may they always come straight from his heart & soul...

Lovely poem, vandana.

Warm hugs,
EA

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4 posted 2003-04-12 09:25 PM


lovely &  heartfelt vandana. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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5 posted 2003-04-12 09:43 PM


Vandana, this is such a sweet love poem.
You are very blessed to have someone who
tells you and shows how much he loves you.
I enjoyed reading.  
Hugs,
Ethel

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6 posted 2003-04-12 10:43 PM


vandana~ Sounds like true love to me.
Thanks for sharing...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

littlewing
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7 posted 2003-04-12 11:02 PM


vandana:

I can hear whispers calling
From the seashore
listen to those ecohes of love
Far far away
From the mountains
I can hear
you tell me

. . .  I have heard through your words
lovely  xxoo

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