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Passion
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since 2003-04-12
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0 posted 2003-04-12 07:09 PM


This is a poem to my best friend, because I'm moving away this summer. I'm 13 years old.

Can this be real?
Can this be true?
I lie on my bed
thinking of you.

All the good times
and the bad.
When we were happy
and when we were sad.

All the laughs we shared,
all the pain we beared.
I thought we would be
friends forever.

And now comes one
of the hardest times in my life.
Will I ever see you again?
Can I bear this strife?

We were always together,
you and me.
We were one
big, happy family.

Now those days are gone
and my lips are dumb.
Unable to speak
of the pain and the fun.

A tear rolls down my cheek.
I reach to wipe it away,
but I stop and think,
hey, I'll let it stay.

Unlike me who has to move
half-way across the country.
But hey, what the heck?
Why let that stop me?

You care for me
and I care for you.
And even after all
the trials we've been through

we can bear one more.
We will endeavor.
'Cause we'll always be
friends forever.

Worlds apart
or a mighty wall,
sisters and friends
can conquer all.


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Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
1 posted 2003-04-12 07:21 PM


I love the ending on this one!!!!  A perfect conclusion, and hopeful too.  Great write, and glad you are here at Passions!!!

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

Paul Wilson
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2 posted 2003-04-13 12:38 PM


Passion~ I really enjoyed your poem.
Though you and your friend may be miles apart doesn't mean the friendship is over. Stay in touch and share your experiences with each other...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2003-04-13 08:27 AM


Enjoyed...James
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