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Black Swan
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since 2003-02-05
Posts 165
on the moon

0 posted 2003-04-12 04:52 AM


I slip away
I slither from fate
your always there
waiting for something

you look at me
i lose the scene
you've got me lost
you've got me cornered

i've often wondered
if you're on to me
probably
your smart like that

just stand next to me
let me hear about you
tell me your story
i'll listen and remember
everything
in everway you tell it
i think your beautfiul
not much more i can say
about it

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Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London
1 posted 2003-04-12 07:27 AM


reads very nicely ... brings a smile

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
2 posted 2003-04-13 09:27 AM


Yes, you can definitely add this ole poet to your list of fans, and I love the way this one flows, so gently......nice job!!

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

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