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Black Swan
Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 165
on the moon

0 posted 2003-04-12 04:24 AM


Pretending im patient
pretending
the essence of this love
is waiting
the longer it takes
the better it'll be
ask me if i wanna sit back
and dream
dreams aren't real
being with you is real
hate to love
but longing to feel
a touch
catch a stare
brush agaisnt you
walking by
dont look away
when i make eye contact
dont say goodbye
if we dont have to
                

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littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
1 posted 2003-04-12 04:53 AM


Goodness you are bleeding here:

dreams aren't real
being with you is real
hate to love
but longing to feel

hate to love yet love to feel . . .
EXACTLY  = nice write xxoo

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
2 posted 2003-04-13 09:20 AM


Sometimes it is the innocence in love that is so compelling...really enjoyed reading this one, and I hope to read many more, as I like your style!!!!  

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

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