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Black Swan
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since 2003-02-05
Posts 165
on the moon

0 posted 2003-04-12 04:20 AM


While i collect my feelings
you simply say you miss me
i melt on the floor
when we talk
its like we never parted

oh i know everything thats bad
and i know everything good
i have a hold of it
i curl up with it at night
i hate dreaming of you

feels like it was just yesterday
we would be lying,
cant lie
i love you still
cant hang on too long
they might figure it out


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littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
1 posted 2003-04-12 04:52 AM


Talia:

i curl up with it at night
i hate dreaming of you

yes - bittersweet - xxoo

Zinsser
Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641
Calif.
2 posted 2003-04-12 09:51 AM


beautiful..........

~~ Connie ~~

Patricia
Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160
Missouri
3 posted 2003-04-12 10:02 AM


I feel the same way about someone who has come and gone in my life.  You said it beautifully and succintly.  Thank you.
garysgirl
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since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
4 posted 2003-04-12 10:05 AM


Talia, this one hurts.....wanting to
hold on to the memories, but also
wanting to let go of the love.  It is
a good thing, though, to have the good
memories to hold onto and dream about.  
Hugs,
Ethel

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