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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2003-04-12 02:48 AM


If I Have Any Prayers Left

I ask the sweetest girl why I liked her so much
and she said it was because she treated me right
and she took good care of me.
And then she went on to say that I treat her
right and take good care of her as well.
Having experienced those relationships in which other women didn't seem to appreciate what they
had I had to agree with her whole heartedly.
God, if I have any prayers left, I pray that
my feelings of appreciation for her will be heavenly blessed.

JamesLee
April11
2003

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LUV_R_GIRL2379
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1 posted 2003-04-12 02:56 AM


very well put! nice expression of feelings!
Ericc
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2 posted 2003-04-12 11:57 AM


Very nice!
Eric

Sunnyone
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3 posted 2003-04-13 09:32 AM


Thoughts of appreciation are always needed be you male or female!!  This is great, James, and so well said!

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

[This message has been edited by Sunnyone (04-13-2003 09:32 AM).]

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4 posted 2003-04-13 09:37 AM


I sure hope so too!
JamesMichael
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5 posted 2003-04-15 05:22 AM


Thank you Luvergirl, Ericc, Sunny and Midnite for the nice responses...James
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