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Professor Gloom
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of Depression

0 posted 2003-04-11 08:24 PM


Dimming down
All the windows on the ground
Curtains drawn.

Fluttering
On and off without a sound
Room to room
Light and gloom
Restless till darkness is found
Whispering.

Although the lights glow not
Memory is not forgot
Sight diminished in the rain
Illuminating with pain.

Grimace face
Splashed with water chilling
On the floor
Cold once more
On gray slate amply spilling
Wet the place.

Dark so near
Yet still I see in dimness
Him I fear

Eyes see eyes
Momentarily brightness
Car goes passed
With a flash
Ending cover of darkness
In surprise.

Gloom


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Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
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Victoria Australia
1 posted 2003-04-11 08:28 PM


what a way to end the darkness, you dazzled me with your words.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Professor Gloom
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2 posted 2003-04-11 08:32 PM


Thank you, Kethry,
As you dazzle me with your praise

Gloom

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