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JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2003-04-11 05:39 PM


The Most Beautiful Place

Walking on the old jeep trail
my mind wanders back to the times
when you walked along with me.
You loved the beauty of nature.
The flora, the trees and the flowers.
The valley streams and the mountain rain
that brings life into this beautiful place.
And I loved to watch you performing just for me.
And I loved the beautiful smile on your face.
For it was you and your smile that made
this the most beautiful place.

JamesLee
April11
2003




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Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2003-04-11 05:43 PM


A beautiful poem of beautiful memories of a beautiful woman in a beautiful place...

Warm hugs,
EA

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2003-04-11 05:58 PM


Lovely James..and was she wearing that love potion #9?
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
3 posted 2003-04-11 06:31 PM


For it was you and your smile that made
this the most beautiful place.


Even the underground can become a beautiful place when your eyes watch such a performance.

Beautiful.
Love, Margherita


JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2003-04-12 02:11 AM


Thank you Earth Angel, Enchantress and Margherita for the nice responses.
Enchantress I have progressed to Love Potion # 10...don't ask me to reveal the recipe...its very sensual, very desirable, very intimate...James

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