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Kellie545
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0 posted 2003-04-11 05:13 PM


Tonight here I am, broken and confused
Wounded from the price of living
Tonight here you are, charming and waiting
Soothing my sores with your kind words

Tonight here you are, hoping for the best
Flirty and smooth, taking a risk
Tonight here I am, knowing I feel like
Destroying something beautiful

Tonight here I am, apologetic
Regretting what I've done to you
Tonight here you are, cold to my sorrow
Having learned your lesson last night

Tonight you catch onto the games I play
Tonight I beg your forgiveness
Tonight you're through with my childishness
Tonnight I realize, so am I

~kellie~

All Gardeners Live In Beautiful Places Because They Make Them So
- Joseph Joubert

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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1 posted 2003-04-11 06:49 PM


This is happening all the time, you described this "dangerous" game so well!
As long as there is forgiveness, you will play on.
Love, Margherita

carol
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since 2003-01-25
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2 posted 2003-04-11 11:14 PM


Kellie, this is so good forgiveness is a great thing to have

Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

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3 posted 2003-04-11 11:28 PM


Very well expressed.  There is much emotion in your words.

Jesus lives in my heart!
sheriliegh@reddens.ca

lost_star
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since 2003-03-15
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4 posted 2003-04-12 01:38 AM


Great work!
LUV_R_GIRL2379
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5 posted 2003-04-12 03:24 AM


tonight you are through with my childishness,
tonight i realise so am i
very well put! i loved it.. keep up the good work!

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