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HopeS
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Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2003-04-11 01:14 PM



My Sincere Sentiments

While writing If only
To someone I miss
I meant to say that
Yet need to say this

If feelings are read
Into thoughts I write
I am thinking of you
Imagine my delight

Sincere sentiments
In sharing my need
Warm hugs I send
Touch as you read

Passionate waves
Flowing the ocean
Reaching to imply
Heartfelt devotion

Words onto paper
Longings flow free
Writing "I love you"
Could you feel me

HopeĀ©2003

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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2003-04-11 01:24 PM


HopeS
Who could not, Hugs.

garysgirl
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2 posted 2003-04-11 01:26 PM


This is so beautiful and
heartfelt, Hope. I love it.
Hugs,
Ethel

NewEnglandlazurlu
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since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise
3 posted 2003-04-11 01:35 PM


Hope ... this is such a beautiful poem and I was especially touched by these lines:

Passionate waves
Flowing the ocean
Reaching to imply
Heartfelt devotion


Hugs for peace, Marti

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