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Marshalzu
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0 posted 2003-04-11 11:33 AM


Lost but not forgotten.

See her
  still love
no return
    
emotion spent
emotion lost

she wanders
     not hands
     not eyes
leaves again.

Heart broke.

[This message has been edited by Marshalzu (04-11-2003 06:35 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-04-11 12:39 PM


Andrew, this one hurts....
there's lots of emotions
felt in it. You did very
good at describing the feeling.
Hugs,
Ethel

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2 posted 2003-04-11 01:56 PM


Andrew~
Such tenderly aching thoughts~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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3 posted 2003-04-11 03:08 PM


I felt the pain and emptiness in this write Andrew..

believe in what your heart feels...

Marshalzu
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4 posted 2003-04-11 07:02 PM


Now thats kind of funny, the peice with emotion in it gets a single reply and this, the emotionless peice gets three and all about emotion. Heh.

Thanks for the replies

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