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LastMoments
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since 2003-03-07
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0 posted 2003-04-10 11:04 PM



From the glass
Point and view
A heart that bleeds
And is left chained
A broken piece
A puzzle placed
Eyes a lost cause
To the storm of falling grace
That casts shadows
Illuminates my fears
Swallows all the time
That wasted away
Erasing my insides
Doubts echo the empty walls
Of a hollow mind
Where the past just seems to haunt
I want to get away
I can't
I'm left to burrow
To be buried in this silence

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Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
1 posted 2003-04-10 11:29 PM


This leaves me in tears....
HUGS,
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
2 posted 2003-04-10 11:30 PM


Welcome To Passions!!!!!

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


KoKo
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since 2003-02-15
Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow
3 posted 2003-04-11 12:38 PM


wow...i can totally relate to this and has brought tears..Enjoyed the read

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
4 posted 2003-04-11 02:17 AM


I love these kinds...

Welcome To Passions!

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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New York
5 posted 2003-04-12 09:32 PM


Last Moments:

felt this one I did - that silence
nice write - I know it well xxoo

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