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Robert Frazier
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since 2003-02-06
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0 posted 2003-04-10 02:26 PM


You see straight through me
with that laser blue
infinity stare
Reduced to nothingness
my secret thoughts
like bones
stripped
left bare

And this thought
"do not hide"
no retreat
is consuming
As I am drawn
by the gravity
of being seen
through
forgiving eyes

Rf

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Krystopher Morris
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since 2002-11-11
Posts 130
Ancient land called Chivalry
1 posted 2003-04-10 02:36 PM


So wonferfully used words. Powerful at that! Thanks for sharing!

“Death, so called, is a thing which makes men weep, and yet a third of life is passed in sleep.” -Lord Byron

Midnitesun
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since 2001-05-18
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Gaia
2 posted 2003-04-10 02:44 PM


eyes open to love
see much

nicely done!

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
3 posted 2003-04-10 03:21 PM


It seems that you have perfect vision as well!

Love & Light,
EA

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