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Hearing Those Words
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Hearing Those Words |
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Ringo 
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes 
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I was with her that day Holding her, loving her Becoming drunk in her beauty Her love for me and my love for her Binding us two as one And in the midst of our eternal day I heard those three words I longed not to hear Not then, not ever As we rode the crest On Passion's wave I heard that phrase My blood went chill... "Honey, I'm home..." When the morning cries and you don't know why... |
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machiner Member
since 2003-03-13
Posts 67MA, US |
YA!!!! Now that's a moment good. very good. Phew! A moment caught, and presented beautifully. Nice job. this belongs in the book... |
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EllinneT Junior Member
since 2003-04-04
Posts 12 |
hey, good job your an excellent writer I'm glad that you think i should get my poem published i hope to here more from you EllinneT |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
This is so cool! |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
yikes! not a pretty sight nice write |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Brad: oooopppsss . . . . nice write/akward moment lol xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (04-12-2003 10:40 PM).] |
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