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lost_star
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0 posted 2003-04-10 02:58 AM


She's not happy
You can see it in her eyes
A hidden pain is tucked behind a lonesome tear

He's there to help her
With love in his heart
But she's blocked by walls
abandoned by fear

Her world feels empty
Her heart feels cold
His love is blinded by past hurt

The closer he gets
The faster she runs
Away from everything she's needing

He feels like giving up
As he sees her fade away
He's hurt by her pain
And discouraged by her fear

The faster she runs
The farther he gets
The farther he gets
The harder it will be for her to find the light

He walks
As she runs
Hoping she'll lose her fear along the way


[This message has been edited by Paul Wilson (04-12-2003 10:48 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-04-10 09:56 AM


Man, this is absolutely awesome. It should be in the book.

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Georgia
2 posted 2003-04-10 12:23 PM


Awesome piece!
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3 posted 2003-04-10 02:48 PM


outstanding
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4 posted 2003-04-10 02:51 PM


~Is speechless~

Wow, one of the best i've read today! Thanks for sharing!

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lost_star
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5 posted 2003-04-11 02:23 AM


Thank you very much for our replys. I really enjoy it here.
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6 posted 2003-04-12 09:34 PM


lost - this is amazing:

The faster she runs
The farther he gets
The farther he gets
The harder it will be for her to find the light

so very true , my friend  xxoo

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7 posted 2003-04-12 09:41 PM


---now that's poetry in m-o-t-i-o-n !!!



Warm hugs,
EA

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8 posted 2003-04-12 10:50 PM


lost star~ Touching write. Enjoyed...Paul

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