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TEACH ME
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LUV_R_GIRL2379 Junior Member
since 2003-04-09
Posts 42 |
TEACH ME Teach me how to dream When they've all been shattered Teach me how to love When my heart's been battered Teach me how to fly When my feet won't leave the ground Teach me how to be free When my soul has been bound Teach me you're not like the loves of my past When i just keep holding my breath Teach me to not second guess you When your love has me scared to death Teach me that there still is real love in the world When i'm looking back and i'm affraid Teach me that you really do love me When you show me the love we've made. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
LUV_R_GIRL2379 - I like your well written thoughts, as they opened in front of me as I read this writing. Very nice... BC |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Well done. Welcome to Passions. Hope you love it as much as I do.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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LUV_R_GIRL2379 Junior Member
since 2003-04-09
Posts 42 |
thanx guys for your opinions..i think i like passions so far! been looking for a good site like this.. |
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Bombella Junior Member
since 2003-04-10
Posts 19Western Australia |
This is a beautiful poem. I hope to see more of your poetry soon. Cherie.. |
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lost_star Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 114NY, U.S.A |
Great poem |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
LUV_R_GIRL~ A lovely thought provoking poem. Welcome to Passions and I hope to read more of your poems...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
LUV - Welcome to a PIP! You will love it here . . . xxoo |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! There's no other poetry site quite like this one, so I do hope you stay awhile, get to know us, and enjoy a whole new world! Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! |
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