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poem 1 - sorry first time here and put this in the wrong forum. :(
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poem 1 - sorry first time here and put this in the wrong forum. :( |
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razorblade New Member
since 2003-04-09
Posts 3 |
Too close to you I feel Left unsure of what is really real… A tear in a wing Starts the spiral down… Too quick to change emotion… Too quick to change devotion… Could have left well enough alone Plunging further down… I thought I thought of everything… So helpless, I… I tried the best I could But even the best bleed… Some times… [This message has been edited by razorblade (04-09-2003 08:13 PM).] |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
A darn nice first post, wherever it is... I'll look forward to more from you. If you want it moved over to Open forum, just click up one of the Moderators at the top of the forum page, and they'll do it for you. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Very nice first post and I've placed it here in Open - but if you would rather it be placed in Corner Pub or Teen, just let me know. Welcome aboard! And please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
blade - awesome first post - Welcome to PIP! I tried the best I could But even the best bleed… Some times… I know . . those bleeds - leave it - you belong here - you will love it here . . . xxoo |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Please don't be sad.....She moved it so it would get lot's of poet attention!!!! Welcome To Passions!!!! I hope you enjoy it here!!!! This is a great first poem....I'd sure like to read more!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hello, WELCOME TO PASSIONS IN POETRY I enjoyed reading your first post and hope to read more. Hugs, Ethel....garysgirl |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
razorblade - yes they do, even the best bleed... BC |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Welcome to Passions, I will be watching for more of your work. Don't be too hard on yourself, even Einstein |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Welcome to Passions. I am so glad that you moced this... although it would have been enjoyable regardless of where you posted. When the morning cries and you don't know why... |
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razorblade New Member
since 2003-04-09
Posts 3 |
thanks for all your support guys - and more thanks to sunshine for moving my poem.  i was a bit confused as to what i was doing. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Welcome! lots of POSITIVE bleeding at this site. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggsssssss) This is very true, but guess what also, it may be hard to believe at first but those who bleed most of all become the best as they can feel compassion and understand the meaning of love deeper and the bleeding will only make you stronger than ever to the point you can never be hurt and only others that bleed like you used to make you cry! You are a very compassionate and spirited person, dearest friend, we all send special hugs your way, God Bless You! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
RB, very good first post! welcome to Passions and I'm sure you will love it here. I hope to see more of your work! take care. amy "love is like a butterfly-- |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Welcome to Passions this is a great first post, hope to see more of your work around Andrew |
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