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Sandpiper
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0 posted 2003-04-09 09:04 PM





empty eyes
gaze through soul windows
painted shut
by moments wasted
walking barefoot on grass
that never got greener;
the “now” of them
becomes days
and months
and years
and never--

tired eyes
search a kaleidoscope prison
praying for any sun
to dry brittle tears
and shine on parchment cheeks;
“soon” their prayer, “soon”
begging light (and salvation),
lest they become
stained glass images
of themselves

and The Watchers watch
with youthful hindsight
and a wrist turn
of the peephole
as faces become one
in a mirror
that will not lie;

'look at me,
look at you'
whispers the mirror
to The Watchers--

'we were once
so much more
than dust'
.

.

.

Art:"The Eyes Have It"--Doreen Hardiman

© Copyright 2003 K. Addison Elliott - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-04-10 10:00 AM


SandPiper~
Oh my !  What an exquisite write~

Beautiful graphic ... with perfect poetic phrasing~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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regards2you
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2 posted 2003-04-10 11:17 AM



Quite revealing, the photo alone...

reminds me how important it is for me, ...to rid myself, of the child and parent within of residual pain which otherwise would imprison  me...and otherwise cause a multiplicity of evergrowing watchers....rather than..growing into the whole of and complete of, the adult of who I am.
Not an easy task, but when the want to is there, God gives us the knowhow...

Very complicated indeed....

Hugs, Pat  


    




..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

[This message has been edited by regards2you (04-10-2003 12:54 PM).]

VAS
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3 posted 2003-04-10 11:27 AM


a fantastic write to an exquisite piece of art, the colors in it so vibrant, yet begging of the light to help them shine

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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4 posted 2003-04-10 11:58 AM


Wow, this is such an intense peice, I got really caught up inside it when I read it, thank you for sharing it with us

Andrew

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5 posted 2003-04-10 05:07 PM


You know I have never quite read a piece of poetry that hit its mark more than this one did.  I was amazed at a couple of these comments as well.  Excellent job, and nice to "see" you here too.  You always were the poet I rushed to read daily to learn from, and now will be able to do that again.  By the way, looking forward to the Vixen in MC she rocks!
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6 posted 2003-04-10 07:11 PM


Outstanding poetry, perfect match for the artwork.
It's a library keeper for me.
Thank you, for sharing this incredible piece.

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