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Dance
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since 2003-03-28
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0 posted 2003-04-09 08:01 PM



Days like today,
makes some wither and gray.
But for me,
days like today are joyful and gay.

I sing with the melody I hear.
I rumble with the thunder
that is so near.

I smile at the lightning,
I dance when it's raining,
I let nature's music flow within.

But the main question is,
what will happen to me,
When it all ends?

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Member Patricius
since 2001-08-31
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just out of reach
1 posted 2003-04-09 08:11 PM


Hmmm...maybe you can dance in the bathroom shower? lol. Just kidding. I really enjoyed this write. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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2 posted 2003-04-10 09:44 PM


Dance - I too love the rain - sometimes like a rebirth but that feeling you get?  Yes - is hard to rid and:

But the main question is,
what will happen to me,
When it all ends?

amazing write here xxoo  

KoKo
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since 2003-02-15
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Inside the shadow's shadow
3 posted 2003-04-11 12:25 PM


Man I LOVED this!!! I also love rain!
This starts out giving me a sort of frolicky (sp?) feel...And then those last lines gives you a hint of curiousity...Anyways! I loved this!

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

lost_star
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since 2003-03-15
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4 posted 2003-04-11 03:03 AM


I still love dancing in the rain. Great poem!
Earth Angel
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5 posted 2003-04-11 10:59 AM


I love the rain and when Mother Nature doesn't cooperate, I pretend I'm in a cleansing and revitalizing rain storm while I am in the shower with the water blasting out on high. If I want a soothing, gentle rain, I decrease the pressure!

Love & Lightening,
EA

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Gaia
6 posted 2003-04-11 04:57 PM


I was born on a rainy day. God help us all if the rain should ever stop for good.
thanks for this post, I enjoyed the refreshing thoughts it brought.

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