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bklynboy
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since 2002-12-15
Posts 660
florida

0 posted 2003-04-09 05:13 PM


I found her in a field of green,
within a dream,
she sat between,

the flowers
without names,
unseen,

her face of grace
on silent screen,
where evening showers
moon with beams,

and through this dream,
i met her gaze,
within the iridescent haze,

and now i've seen
her charming ways,

her gift of friendship
till now still amaze,
and breath life to
an ordinary man's malaise
i hope to see her
come one bright sunny day


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regards2you
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since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940
California
1 posted 2003-04-09 05:17 PM




Enjoyed this upbeat, uplifting poem.
Apt descriptions, I believe..tho. you left out the spice, but, still captured quite well.


So do I hope so.  


Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

bklynboy
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since 2002-12-15
Posts 660
florida
2 posted 2003-04-09 05:23 PM


Pat- Thanks for your reply on this and other postings. I never take offense to any replies negative or otherwise. If you said something critical during one of my first writings, I am sure I deserved it and only learned from it. I truly appreciate yours and other input.
BB

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2003-04-09 06:27 PM


Words of adoration from one who appears to be smitten by a sex kitten...

Life & Light,
EA

Dragon Mistress
Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 289
Washington, USA.
4 posted 2003-04-09 06:35 PM


Aww, this was nice!  I liked it much!  *huggles* great stuff!
Tanerz

~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~

WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon
5 posted 2003-04-11 10:22 AM


I liked this ode. It's sweet and sensual.
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