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Deep_Inside
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0 posted 2003-04-09 03:34 PM


Once again I traveled home
and again I went to sleep
Asking why must I be so all alone
feeling this pain of love so deep

Last night as clouds drew high
I lay awake and wondered why
Why do reasons however true
refuse my need to be with you

In my dreams I reached for you
to find an empty side
Like my bed my life a void
and in my heart I died

When at night I travel home
my heart begins to weep
My destination loneliness
my love for you so deep

I know four seasons are not so long
a year is all they make
Yet to live them without you beside me
may be more than I can take


© Copyright 2003 Matt - All Rights Reserved
Justbleu
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1 posted 2003-04-09 04:00 PM


I know it hurts....but please hang on!!!!
Heartfelt words wonderfully penned!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


Brad Majors
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2 posted 2003-04-09 04:25 PM


Nice
JamesMichael
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3 posted 2003-04-09 04:27 PM


Tell me about it...James
Earth Angel
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4 posted 2003-04-09 04:47 PM


The trick is in loving ourselves as much as we do others!  

Warm hugs for a hurting heart,
EA

j0n4th4n
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5 posted 2003-04-09 06:18 PM


excellent poem, describes the feelings wonderfully.

i have felt like this also, in fact, i think most of us have (or all).

Aimster
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6 posted 2003-04-10 12:06 PM


such a heart wrenching write. i think
that you have penned a poem we all or
at least most of us all can most def
relate to. for that, you surely got
my vote! hope to see this in the book!
take care.
amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

vandana
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7 posted 2003-04-10 12:10 PM


enjoyed
Black Swan
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8 posted 2003-04-12 03:33 AM


Bah! hey, whats up? Nice friggin poem, i give it my seal of approval hehe lol i'll talk to ya soon i hope! hope everything is going ok ~Talia
regards2you
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9 posted 2003-04-12 11:30 AM




So heart touching. Unless I am reading this wrong, which is my norm, it sounds like a separation of only a year and then your love will be back?

If that is what you meant as four seasons....then, though sad and lonely, at least there will be a reunion.

Some of us feel this way, and there will never be a union, let alone a reunion.

Good poem, made me think and definitely feel.

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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