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CocoBaci
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0 posted 2003-04-09 01:33 PM



    
Each passing night
in moonlit sky
she lay's awake
with tears
that seem
to etch a trail
upon her cheek
of once upon
a time of dreams...
    
In quiet tremble
a whisper is heard
amid the swirl
of midnight breeze
a desperate plea
from her very soul
to be, if not
for a single moment
swept far away
from this
abandonded place
of yesterday's
gone and borrowed...
    
*~coco~*

[This message has been edited by CocoBaci (04-09-2003 01:34 PM).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2003-04-09 01:42 PM



of once upon
a time of dreams...

~*~

Now Coco...you know I sigh
much too loud
when I am supposed to be doing
other things...

this is precious...
and a

nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2003-04-09 01:47 PM


~Smiling~ I love your poetry
hugs
M

Enchantress
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3 posted 2003-04-09 01:50 PM


Exquisite!  Simply beautiful!
I love this Coco!!
~Sugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2003-04-09 02:45 PM


CoCoBaci~
*sighs*
Such a pleasure ... always ... to read your lovely poetic thoughts~

You're not here nearly often enough, ya' know ?
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Krystopher Morris
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5 posted 2003-04-09 02:50 PM


Wow, Thanks for sharing!


Never forget to live your life.

[This message has been edited by Krystopher Morris (04-09-2003 02:51 PM).]

Janet Marie
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6 posted 2003-04-09 03:25 PM


Yesterday may be gone and borrowed but this poetic jewel is going in my library...
LOVELY poetess Coco...truly!!
and I second that you arent here enough

"and when we get to the pearly gates ...
we'll find what we called our sins were just mistakes."

Tom Kimmel


JamesMichael
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7 posted 2003-04-09 04:21 PM


Very nice...James
CocoBaci
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8 posted 2003-04-09 07:22 PM


SweetPoetFriends Sunshine, Nakdthoughts, Enchantress, Marge, Krystopher, JM and JamesMichael...
I thank each of you
sooooo bearry bearry much
for taking a peak
at this lil rhyme...
Your comments2me
in your reply
touch that
special place
within
my
heart...

*~coco~*

vandana
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9 posted 2003-04-09 08:33 PM


enjoyed
BluesSerenade
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10 posted 2003-04-09 08:39 PM


Loved the gentle longing in this Coco~

So sweet these tender thoughts from you.

CocoBaci
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11 posted 2003-04-09 10:31 PM


PoetFriends Vandana & Blues....
Thank you2for coming by
Ya know your kindness always
brings out a smile
Hugs2u

*~coco~*

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