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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2003-04-09 12:30 PM



I Will Know

When I meet him, I will know,
thoughts will jumble and rearrange.
There'll be no sweeping off my feet,
just chemistry that we'll exchange.

I'll free the binds that tie me here.
I'll bathe in words that lips will tell.
I'll lose the loneliness of one
and rest my love, in arms to dwell.

The sun will shine on darkest days.
The moon will rise to light my nights.
I will know him, when we meet.
My heart will dress him in my writes.

A poet's needs will draw him near,
and I will paint him in my word.
He will never need to dream
for I'll be here, commitment heard.

I will know him, temptation not.
He will give his truth to me.
I will know him, when we meet
no longer needing to dream of he.

M

*Ethel inspired

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Krystopher Morris
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Ancient land called Chivalry
1 posted 2003-04-09 12:37 PM


Interestingly Beautiful! Thanks for sharing!

Poetry is love and love is life.

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2003-04-09 04:02 PM


hopefully what I write will come true some day
thanks
M

Janet Marie
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3 posted 2003-04-09 04:55 PM


I will know him, when we meet.
My heart will dress him in my writes.

A poet's needs will draw him near,
and I will paint him in my word.
===========================

and we as poets, know the gift of such inspiration.
Lovely rhymes poetess M

"and when we get to the pearly gates ...
we'll find what we called our sins were just mistakes."

Tom Kimmel


vandana
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4 posted 2003-04-09 08:35 PM


enjoyed
littlewing
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5 posted 2003-04-10 10:07 PM


nakd - I loved this :

The sun will shine on darkest days.
The moon will rise to light my nights.

is just beautiful - yes - you will surely know . . . xxoo

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2003-04-10 10:13 PM


Maureen...this is lovely, especially enjoyed the closing stanza.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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