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Mysteria
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0 posted 2003-04-09 01:51 AM




    




Art: Gilbert Williams "Lady Of The Sea"


Don't be too hard on yourself - even Einstein had trouble tying his shoelaces.

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1 posted 2003-04-09 05:05 AM


Enjoyed...James
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2 posted 2003-04-09 05:13 AM


WOW.... the images... splendid...

regards,
sudhir

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3 posted 2003-04-09 06:49 AM



Ah look at you...a haiga delight...to take in slowly because it really does creep up on you....I love all three images...all three!

You're glowing!

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4 posted 2003-04-09 08:21 AM


Well look at you...
how cool are those..and how lovely...


But hows a moth supposed to cut and copy her fave lines when its on a picture???
LOL

Ok...just for you..I will type them in.. but dont get spoiled  

"jeweled velvet coat of darkness falls"

"stars pierce the night like fireflies"

Wonderful imagery and word play here...even snuck in some alliterations

very cool to see a poet trying new things and mastering them so quickly
well done poetess Sharon.

"and when we get to the pearly gates ...
we'll find what we called our sins were just mistakes."

Tom Kimmel


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5 posted 2003-04-09 08:25 AM


You just can't beat a beautiful sunset in poetry, can you?.. This is beautiful, Mysterias one...
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6 posted 2003-04-09 08:31 AM


Sharon, a sunset over the water.....
my favorite scene of all time. It's just
so beautiful, isn't it?

And of course, your poem is beautiful,
as all of your poetry is.

Heart Hugs,
Ethel

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7 posted 2003-04-09 08:49 AM




(smiles) Yay! Oh Sharon, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, I love colorful skies and I know deep down we are never alone when th heavens brush gentle pastels in the sky, yay! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is dazzling, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sharon, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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8 posted 2003-04-09 08:54 AM


Ah Sharon..these are wonderful!
I'm enjoying them so much this morning!
Very well done!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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9 posted 2003-04-09 08:59 AM


This is just beautiful, Sharon. I love the sunset.
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10 posted 2003-04-09 09:05 AM


A feast for my eyes, food for my soul, and a delight for my palette! Deliciously divine!

Love & Eternal Light,
Linda

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11 posted 2003-04-09 03:42 PM


Ahhh you all are so sweet and supportive - I love to try something new and at least this one didn't backfire on me
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12 posted 2003-04-10 03:45 PM


This reminded me of some times when the setting is just perfect for romance... and I'm alone. *S* This is a beautiful presentation, Mysty one... poem and picture are perfect together. *S*
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13 posted 2003-04-10 03:49 PM


This is just lovely - until the end - hoping that sunset joins the sea with the one you love - this is just beautiful and the graphic quite amazing . . .  xxoo
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14 posted 2003-04-11 02:27 AM



Not quite so alone...

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15 posted 2003-04-11 03:46 AM


just a beautiful presentation!
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16 posted 2003-04-11 03:56 AM


Again, you are all too kind, and I have learned there is such a huge difference between being lonely and alone, and I know how to embrace the difference Thank you.
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17 posted 2003-04-11 08:24 AM


Lovely presentation Sharon!!--and you are so right, "alone" and "lonely" are states of mind totally unrelated to the company of others (or lack of)---enjoyed!

"And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul."
Pablo Neruda

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18 posted 2003-04-11 08:31 AM


Sharon,
You captured me today.

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19 posted 2003-04-11 08:36 AM


Wonderful images...I loved the pictures..the on the page and the ones created in my imagination..

believe in what your heart feels...

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20 posted 2003-04-11 10:09 AM


Beautiful!!! And I loved the picture, too! Well done!!!!

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

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21 posted 2003-04-11 10:53 AM


Sharon...This is spectacular!  
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22 posted 2003-04-11 01:42 PM


Thank you everyone for your wonderful comments.  I have been madly snapping photos to try something new (not this one though) and will post some new ones soon.  To Sandpiper and Sy, knowing how to be alone with yourself is a wonderful thing.  Sy, I miss you sweet man - and think of you often so really -  you are not alone, as you are in my thoughts
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