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Mysteria
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0 posted 2003-04-09 12:55 PM



    



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1 posted 2003-04-09 01:09 AM


Sharon,
I feel the tears. Well done.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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2 posted 2003-04-09 01:48 AM


In the leaving, our tears are left behind....

And time goes by so slowly~

Be well Mysteria~

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3 posted 2003-04-09 01:50 AM


This is so sad, Sharon! I hope you are okay.
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4 posted 2003-04-09 01:53 AM


Just a poem! Thanks for reading it though.  I am having fun with graphics tonight and trying to write what I see in them.  Thank you so much.
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5 posted 2003-04-09 08:36 AM


A single teardrop
Winsome dwell upon my lid
In saying good-bye

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6 posted 2003-04-09 08:44 AM


Well done Sharon..the words fit thte picture perfectly.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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7 posted 2003-04-09 02:08 PM


salt on the wound,
yet somehow healing

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8 posted 2003-04-09 03:32 PM


These are fun - try some!  Thanks all.
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9 posted 2003-04-09 05:55 PM


So sad, yet so beautiful.

Take care.....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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10 posted 2003-04-09 06:05 PM


nice
serenity blaze
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11 posted 2003-04-09 06:05 PM


You MUST teach me this...

silent awe.

(and it's not easy to shut me up...)

but? you MUST teach me this...


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12 posted 2003-04-09 07:09 PM



and sure I will teach you, but you need Photoshop to do it with Karen.

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13 posted 2003-04-10 04:17 AM


Mysteria~ One little teardrop can hold an ocean of feelings. Enjoyed...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

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14 posted 2003-04-10 04:30 AM


Sharon.. this is absolutely lovely.

Maree

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15 posted 2003-04-10 05:37 AM


I am liking these a lot Sharon. Nicely captured!

Best wishes and hugs,
/Kit

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16 posted 2003-04-10 06:02 AM


the words and the graphic really complement each other well..i enjoyed this one a lot...

may i ask what's a haiga? how different it is from a haiku/senryu? being curious here

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17 posted 2003-04-10 06:32 AM


i hope all is well! the pic with the poem really made an impact.
robin

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18 posted 2003-04-12 09:00 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Sharon, this is so very heartbreaking, sweet friend, I hope this doesn't apply to you now but I know this is common to so many and my heart sends hugs out to them all! (sad sigh) This is very well-presented, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sharon, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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19 posted 2003-04-13 01:36 AM


Mysteria - you have penned here
in so few words what is scattered
among these pages of blue

Excellent xxoo

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20 posted 2003-04-13 02:34 AM


Everyone of you are so kind in your lovely comments, and I am absolutely delighted you enjoyed this.  Thank you so much.


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