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leighsa
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since 2003-02-27
Posts 74
Oregon, United States Of America

0 posted 2003-04-09 12:25 PM



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I am blind,
No longer can see.
You gave me a life,
Thats suppose to be.

I set out my hand,
as you did yours.

I set My love free,
Into your pors.

I told you
You were perfect,
You can't deny.

You lifted the rock,
That I lay beneath.

YOu gave me a life
Thats suppose to be.

When someone tears me down,
You bring me back up.

I lifted my head,
That i struggle to hold high.

I will promise you,
I will never say goodbye...

Ashgiel


© Copyright 2003 Leighsa Marie Costa - All Rights Reserved
redheart angrybraids
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since 2000-04-16
Posts 410
honolulu, hawaii
1 posted 2003-04-09 07:29 AM


what does this mean if you don't mind me asking?

Kindly,
Redheart Angrybraids


Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
2 posted 2003-04-09 10:20 AM


Mutual love and devotion makes the heart sing!

Love & Light,
EA

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2003-04-09 04:25 PM


Enjoyed...James
leighsa
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since 2003-02-27
Posts 74
Oregon, United States Of America
4 posted 2003-04-10 12:15 PM


I thought as the one i love as an angel....
What i mean by this poem is that he gave me a life that I understand...
I never knew what i really was going for until he showed me that this land is full of rainbows if you know what i mean....
He showed me the real meaning in living.
Showed me what i was going to live for...
He brightened the light in my head..
He gave me a chance to be myself and show the inner person... Whati ment by the lines in this poem is: He was the only one who cared enough to tell me that life was worth living for and he would always be there in all conditions....
He lifted the rock that i lay beneath, i Ment by that was he brought me up when i was put down by others and showed me the  light in the sky that i had never looked forward to looking at.....


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