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Thomas119gold
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0 posted 2003-04-08 02:43 PM


Fairy tale
(Name of the bad guy is Pronouced Ugly-Bean)

There was once a land of bliss
nothing seemed amiss
until one day an ogre came that way
and paved away all happiness

The Ogre's name was Ugleebean
He caught the Queen and treated her very obscene
Ugleebeen was a terrible sight to see and very mean

All smiles faded soon and all felt the horrible gloom as the Ogre gloated all day
He treated his new subjects to true tyranny
and even beat up the Princess little old nanny

Tears began to pour and soon the land had its very own ocean shore
for all the salted sadness surround the once town of gladness

Who would save the Queen and her subjects?
Who indeed would come to their rescue?
What will they ever do?

Then one summer’s eve something happened something new
A Sailor arrived a Roguish Kind of guy
Who had seen many places and really ugly faces
stepped on shore

He saw the land of sorrow and recalled a land of Bliss in this place long ago
He asked the nearest man
that man screamed and then fled
truly such dread

The Sailor of Roguish nature soon started to explore this sin could not be ignored
It was not long before the Ogre became aware of this new edition to his stolen land

Ugleebean let out a roar
calling out our would be Hero
naming the sailor a son of a *#@^+
This did not fare well with our man of the sea

He promised he would bring this Ogre to his knees
The fight had started quickly
Pain screamed from both foes
as they threw numerous elbows and fist

Teeth grinded and some bones split
Our hero broke the Ogres hip causing a great fall
and a sinking feeling as Ugleebean lay in the dirt
he had lost

The Bully had been beaten and sent on his way
the land of sorrow started to fade and was replaced with its former Bliss and grandeur

Now the Queen watched this great battle
and new where her heart wanted to be
with that Roguish sailor who fought so bravely

Luck be told the sailor caught sight of the Queen
and knew all would become right
and in the end a Happily ever after
would began on that night

[This message has been edited by Thomas119gold (04-08-2003 04:08 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-04-08 02:46 PM


I liked this alot!
WhiteRose
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2 posted 2003-04-08 08:29 PM


Hi Rogue

I really enjoyed this write.

Thomas119gold
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3 posted 2003-04-09 03:36 PM


Thank you I wanted to try something new
Thomas
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