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One Word, Felt

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regards2you
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Odd,
One word, felt
Can cause
Bravery
To sail
The day's storm
And hail
The night's harm
Giving
Courage
To face the
Unknowns

One word, felt.

~Love!~
.
.
.


..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

© Copyright 2003 Patricia L.Thompson - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 04-08-2003 04:35 PM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

Indeed! It holds the true power!
LOVE! ... felt.
Beautiful word-s!
Love, Margherita
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2 posted 04-08-2003 04:46 PM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

Love is a many splendored thing...

Love & Light,
Linda
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3 posted 04-08-2003 06:26 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

Yes!!!  

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

regards2you
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4 posted 04-08-2003 08:42 PM       View Profile for regards2you   Email regards2you   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for regards2you


Thanks all for reading and replying.
Certainly this isn't my best poem but after having read poetry awhile this AM I felt inspired to capture my feelings about feeling loved....

It can change one's outlook tremendously....

Hugs to you,  Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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Chuckling here...don't do anything stupid though..as they say, love can be blind...like the way you used "sail" and "hail"...unusual rhymes here...
regards2you
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Kaile,

I don't do anything stupid...[very often] smiles....

Here is how it goes:

SAIL: As in [through in victory]

HAIL: As in [salute; yet power to pass               unscathed]

Thank you. I do appreciate you taking the time to read my poetry and to type out a thoughtful reply. It means a lot to be acknowledged even to novice poets, or maybe, especially to, novice poets such as myself...it is supportive and  encouraging...


Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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Pat = amazing:

One word, felt
Can cause
Bravery
To sail
The day's storm
And hail
The night's harm

I would have voted for this . . .xxoo
regards2you
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Sue,

Thank you. I have two in the book already and feel very fortunate indeed....what a nice thing to let me know...had been reading poetry and besides that, a very dear lady here had sent me the nicest e-mail and made me feel quite good...~special~ and loved and cared about...wanted to capture those feelings of what a difference ~feeling~, not knowing, but feeling loved makes....like you can conquer anything!

I appreciate you taking the time to read and to reply.

Glad you liked, Hugs, Pat

Thanks again...means a lot....

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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So very true, Pat!

Beautiful!

Sunkissed.
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One word felt is what makes them worth giving,

...and I thank you for yours Pat~

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Marge Tindal
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Pat~
In it's brevity, this is just so beautifully done~

You sure know how to work a thought~
I just LOVE this~
Yep ... there's that word~

Know what ??? ... you're just one of the nicest ladies I know~
I am soooooo glad that God saw fit to put you in my life~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~


Why there YOU are AGAIN ???

Take those shades off ... I seeeee you~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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