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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2003-04-08 11:16 AM



Homebound
Silent sitting
Watching words, confined
Restricting thoughts to yesterday
Gathering moments, clustering support
Tolerating pain, depending
Expectations foreseen
Dissipating
Limits

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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1 posted 2003-04-08 11:38 AM




~M~

Enjoyed, though I have not tried this form yet.

This line: "Expectations foreseen"

So difficult, yet critically important when dealing with feelings.  

Shows lots of self-evaluation and growth of anyone going thr. changes in life, which isn't easy, yet, possible.

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2003-04-08 11:45 AM


Hi, actually I am sick at the moment and can't leave the house for a while...so I thought a rictometer would fit the mood *s

thanks
M

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3 posted 2003-04-08 01:21 PM



Wynter~
Sorry you're sick
Glad you've got to inking
A little more of your thinking
Oh .. don't call the doctor, they charge too much
A little quilling should do it
Poetess heal thyself
Write your feelings
Wynter~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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4 posted 2003-04-08 02:20 PM


Nice
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