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0 posted 2003-04-08 04:03 AM


you see it in her eyes.
you hear it in hear voice.
that desperate cry.

she longs for you to hold her.
she needs you to make her feel loved.
she needs you to make her feel wanted.

she needs you.
the love you gave her is gone.
you hurt her.

why didn't youlove her?
why didn't you want her?
didn't you hear her?
didn't you want her?

her heart is cold now.
she cannot love again.
because of you!

your cold heart,
that saw it in her eyes.
your cold heart,
that heard it in her voice.

i hope you are happy with what you have done.
you tore her soul apart.
turned her heat cold.

i pray you see that you were wrong.
with the 4 harsh words you said you her....
I DON'T LOVE YOU.

because of you!
she cannot love again.
because of you!
her heart is cold
because of you!

because of you!

i am who i am and that's all that i am and all i shall ever be and if you don't like who i am then leave!

© Copyright 2003 Robin Hill - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-04-08 04:20 AM


*big hugs* this should go in

Life may be hard, but it's your attitude that determines your happieness

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2 posted 2003-04-08 04:24 AM


sorry this is so angst filled but it's another late night and it wasn't a good day/night for me so yea poetry is awesome to get feelings out

i am who i am and that's all that i am and all i shall ever be and if you don't like who i am then leave!

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3 posted 2003-04-08 04:51 AM


good to let it all out...
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4 posted 2003-04-08 05:15 AM


I understand your outpour due to fear ... really so very painful, you surely succeeded in transmitting your pain ..... but truth is we can't force anyone to love us, we can't blame them if they say they don't love us. It hurts, but the way out is to open your heart to a new love .... which will manifest, be sure, if your heart is open.
Hugs, Margherita

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5 posted 2003-04-08 06:14 AM


Nice expression of your feelings...James
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6 posted 2003-04-08 10:54 PM


ty all for your comments!

i am who i am and that's all that i am and all i shall ever be and if you don't like who i am then leave!

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7 posted 2003-04-09 10:39 AM






Love & Light,
Earth Angel

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (04-09-2003 10:40 AM).]

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