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theresa0847
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0 posted 2003-04-08 01:23 AM



I don’t know how to tell you.
For the word “love” seems to simple to use.
The feeling I have in the depth of my heart
Is a feeling men have often abused.
With you this world seems so clear.
There are no worries and I no longer fear.
You take me to a place.
And in it, a strong passion lingers here.

With you I am swept away.
Swept away like a breeze on a hot summer’s day.
The way a desert thirsts for rain.
It is how my soul screams your name.

I live off your love.
I breathe through each kiss.
My body hungers for your touch.
For it brings eternal bliss.
Being without you,
Is something I cannot foresee.
This world holds no meaning,
If you can’t share it with me.

Tell me this now…
Tell me just one thing…
Tell me you’ll love me…
For all eternity…

~Theresa Rodriguez

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-04-08 04:55 AM


it's a nice thing to hear...beautiful write
littlewing
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2 posted 2003-04-09 01:59 AM


Theresa:

Tell me this now…
Tell me just one thing…

I loved this - truly . . . know it  xxoo

bslicker
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3 posted 2003-04-09 02:04 AM


bravo with this one


A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
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Dance
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4 posted 2003-04-09 08:06 PM


The right words just seem to flow straight from your heart. Good job!

~*~DANCE~*~


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