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Shimlu
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since 2003-02-16
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0 posted 2003-04-07 10:44 PM



The passion of writing comes deeply
My soul guides my hand on the paper
Making the spaces filled with life
It's engrossing to have this feeling
To know what it is to have this talent
Makes my horizons broader, sensing now

I feel, see, and hear everything I need
To engross the heart, is to engross life
I write with my mind etching pictures,
On that fine slab of marble
The ancients can tell me now
Secrets to my own world named enigma

Feeling deeply connected
To the ageless art of writing
Becoming intangled in natures beauty
I sense the souls around me now
Insight within shows me
I am one, I am karma itself
Into the heart,
I sought the answers

To become true,
Is to form a flower

To find time itself,
Is to blossom

To explore the unknown,
Is to pollinate

To discover existence,
Is to . . . .


Existence is always near an end
The end will find its way
To time itself

Then we shall see finally
There's more then meets the eye

© Copyright 2003 Shimlu - All Rights Reserved
Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
1 posted 2003-04-07 11:43 PM


Hello Shimlu

I was totally engrossed with your words and found myself relating to all you described.  I only found the power of the pen two years ago when I began writing and haven't put down my pen since.  My love of writing has broadened my horizons, made me a better person and introduced me to some wonderful and extremely talented people.  I only wish that you were including this in the book submissions because I would have gladly voted for you.  I'll look forward to reading more of your words.

Here is a little something for you, written by me.

"A poet weaves his words
through each verse to create
a most beautiful tapestry
for us all to admire."


Take care.....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
2 posted 2003-04-08 10:59 PM


I cannot believe that there are no other comments other than mine on this fine piece of writing so I'm putting it back on top where it belongs.

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2003-04-09 01:47 PM


To become true,
Is to form a flower

To find time itself,
Is to blossom

To explore the unknown,
Is to pollinate

To discover existence,
Is to . . . .


Existence is always near an end
The end will find its way
To time itself

Then we shall see finally
There's more then meets the eye

~*~

Well done, Shimlu...

          Karilea - If I whisper, will you listen?...

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2003-04-09 02:49 PM


Shimlu~
This is just lovely~

Welcome to the wonderful circle of poets and friends~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Shimlu
Junior Member
since 2003-02-16
Posts 11

5 posted 2003-04-09 10:43 PM


Thank you for the comments, I hope to see and read your guys poetry soon too.  Be well
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