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morefiah
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since 2003-03-26
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Spanish Town, Jamaica

0 posted 2003-04-07 08:27 PM



Love, unspoken
smolders in the heart;
But batters at the door
of the wary lovers soul,
crying for release:
Unfettered let me be.


© Copyright 2003 Garfield Harvey - All Rights Reserved
Starsfalling
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since 2003-03-18
Posts 94
some where deep in the shadows
1 posted 2003-04-07 08:34 PM


wow sweet... short and direct, i like it
Good job
-lance

There is no peace among the stars, only an eternity of carnage and slaughter and the laughter of thirsting gods

vandana
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2 posted 2003-04-07 08:46 PM


enjoyed
lost_star
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since 2003-03-15
Posts 114
NY, U.S.A
3 posted 2003-04-08 02:34 AM


Great Poem!
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