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Adonis Cross
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0 posted 2003-04-07 03:02 PM



Though others may love for a limited span,
Then see it to its ending,
While other loves ended the day they began
And some are just pretending,
Our love is a play with an infinite run,
Without a final curtain;
And we, as the players, will flourish as one,
Like Liz and Richard Burton.

Though some have a heart that sporadically strays
From who it beats for chiefly,
And some, like a candle of Edna Millay's,
May burn for one, but briefly,
You'll live as my angel until you have died,
And really wear a halo--
'Til then, may we always remain side by side,
Like "Puffy" Combs and J.Lo.


© Copyright 2003 Adonis Cross - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-04-07 03:26 PM


AdonisCross~
A lovely, lovely entrance into our wonderful circle of poets and friends~

W E L C O M E !
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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2 posted 2003-04-07 03:28 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
I thoroughly enjoyed your opening post!
I shall be looking forward to reading more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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3 posted 2003-04-07 03:30 PM


What an interesting take on love! Except Puffy and J. Lo didn't stay together. Well anyway, well written and welcome to Passions!

~Liz

Waited on a line of greens and blues, just to be the next to be with you..
~Mr. Big

Adonis Cross
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4 posted 2003-04-07 03:36 PM


That's the point! None of the couples I mentioned stayed together! That's why the poem is called "Romance Without Research".

[This message has been edited by Adonis Cross (04-07-2003 03:37 PM).]

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5 posted 2003-04-07 03:38 PM


Welcome to passions

bernie

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6 posted 2003-04-07 03:43 PM


Welcome to Pips. I see you have a healthy playful sense of humor.
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7 posted 2003-04-07 04:28 PM




(giggles in delight) Oh my gosh, this is such a playful and candied debut, dearest friend, nope, J Lo and Puff Daddy didn't stay together but at least everyone has to try to make opposites attract sometime, LOL! (smiles) Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Kethry
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8 posted 2003-04-07 05:51 PM


Your whimsey is welcome here. I hope to read more.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



JamesMichael
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9 posted 2003-04-07 06:05 PM


Some love and stray and some love and stay...wonder how long Jennifer and Ben will last?   James
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10 posted 2003-04-07 06:55 PM


enjoyed
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