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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia 
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The words dance around my window waiting to come in I wait and ponder but a moment as they twist and spin Like a poetic kaleidoscope their patterns couplets and feet change before my eyes Then to my surprise my resting pen springs to life How did the words sneak past my defense when I am fully awake Or in my enchantment did I the window break Like a rainbow the words text flow from window to pen to blank paper below forming creating with each and every stroke melodic verse That I alone could have never wrote. Then they left as swiftly as they came the words spinning above my head stopping a moment at the window sill as to say adieu then floating on the passing night breeze as the sun brings the morning new looking down to paper in my hand I see a poem looking this way and that sign my name smile though I know it a lie and hope my new found muses will bless me yet again until my name is Frost or someday I am rich. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Brad, Grins here....can so relate...almost like 'automatic writing'....well, sorta... Enjoyed this; well written. Hugs, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
thank you |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BradMajors~ Oh boy ! Do I ever 'know' this or what ? Wonderful *smile* plays my lips~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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j0n4th4n Member
since 2003-03-11
Posts 94 |
you seem to write with flair! well done |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
thank you |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
ohhhh...I hate when the words sneak in and I am not ready...have to run for paper and pen, repeating the lines over and over, least I forget... Great write! Susan |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
How did the words sneak past my defense when I am fully awake *** LOL, my muse sneaks past me too! |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Thank you |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful write...much enjoyed! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
wonderful.....I think this is my favorite of yours so far....just wonderful!!!! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Brad - this IS amazing - truly - hehehe - I look down sometimes and wonder hmmm where did THAT come from??? Ill be looking for your name . . . xxoo |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I liked how you tied in the frost, over the rainbow, through the window into words. Enjoyed the fleeting moment~ |
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