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Disintegration of a Marriage

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Patricia
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0 posted 04-07-2003 12:03 PM       View Profile for Patricia   Email Patricia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Patricia

Casual carelessness as
dismissing ominous clouds
until lightning forces joined trees
to rift in the cluttered forest.

Cold callousness as sharp as the
bitter chill of an unexpected snow storm
in the early blossoming spring
forever halting growth.

Complete catastrophe as an act
of nature uproots foundations
which were once firmly grounded
in the faith of an enduring forever.
© Copyright 2003 Patricia A. Plotz - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 04-07-2003 12:10 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine


Yep.  This cinched it.
If I miss one of your poems?
E-mail the link.

I don't like to miss the good stuff...

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Patricia Plotz,

As interesting a name as was this poem which got my attention.

Well written...

"Casual carelessness"

"Cold callousness"

"Complete catastrope"

All true in friendship or in a love (marriage) relationship.....

Enjoy your talent.

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

Brad Majors
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I understand this all too well
bslicker
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4 posted 04-07-2003 04:24 PM       View Profile for bslicker   Email bslicker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bslicker

Nice writing
Like a lot, maybe cause i have one.

Bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

Enchantress
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Somewhere in time~


5 posted 04-07-2003 04:52 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

Oh this is superb writing!
Most enjoyed...I'll be looking for more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Janet Marie
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clever write of alliteration, assonance and imagery...well done poetess Patricia...
Welcome to poetry land and hello from a fellow MO resident! Nice to have you join us here.

"and when we get to the pearly gates ...
we'll find what we called our sins were just mistakes."

Tom Kimmel

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now


7 posted 04-07-2003 08:29 PM       View Profile for Bill Charles   Email Bill Charles   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bill Charles

Patricia - this writing says it like it is...

BC
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JamesMichael
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Nice writing...James
 
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