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EagleScorpion
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since 2000-03-08

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Here, Now, Forever

0 posted 2003-04-07 09:59 AM

Hush, Hush, Do you hear that noise?
..Watching a movie on a rainy morning..
On planet Earth I am a human boy.

Hush, Hush, that's what you should do.
It's the noise of our dreams all coming true.
One of my favorite movies this is.
Life begins, with a kiss.

Hush, Hush, my friend, and be well.
Why are we here? Only time can tell,
Why does it happen?
Because it happens.
Be well, my friend, be well.

Hush, Hush, Do you hear that noise?
It's the sound of dreams coming true.
..Watching my favorite movie,
on a cold and gray April morning.

All pain vanish without a trace!
From person to person,
From truth to truth,
There is no single truth,
As the truth of her beauty.
and the promise in her face.

..The tears in her knowing eyes..

Life begins, with a kiss.

Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our feet when our wings have trouble
remembering how to fly.

© Copyright 2003 Joseph Alexander Knob - All Rights Reserved

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Member Rara Avis

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In Your Poetic Mind

1 posted 2003-04-07 10:05 AM

Standing to applaud you....this is most brilliant!
Lauren~

Through the darkness
I can see your light
And you will always shine
And I can feel your heart in mine

I will remember you

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

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Realms of Light

2 posted 2003-04-07 10:09 AM

Yes, life begins with a kiss...

Lovely!

Love & Light,
EA

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

3 posted 2003-04-07 10:16 AM

This is especially lovely. Great thoughts. I voted. Hope not too late.

Enjoyed greatly, Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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Between the Lines

4 posted 2003-04-07 10:20 AM

the truth of her beauty.
and the promise in her face.

pretty lines...
M

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since 2001-04-03

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5 posted 2003-04-07 12:30 PM

Nicely done!

SPIRIT
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since 2002-12-29

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California Desert

6 posted 2003-04-08 01:25 PM

Very fine indeed. I happily cast my vote.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

7 posted 2003-04-08 02:04 PM

Hush Hush...can you hear it from there
its me voting for your poem

Wonderful write human boy poet

"and when we get to the pearly gates ...
we'll find what we called our sins were just mistakes."

Tom Kimmel

carol
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since 2003-01-25

Posts 624
Florida USA

8 posted 2003-04-15 09:46 PM

you got my vote

Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

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