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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

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Eternity

0 posted 2003-04-07 05:28 AM

The Longing

My longing stretches
from my soul to yours until
we shall meet again.

[This message has been edited by Margherita (04-07-2003 05:30 AM).]

dreambuilder
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since 2003-03-23

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caddyshack

1 posted 2003-04-07 06:13 AM

what a thought much needed thank you
is beautiful

Lady In White

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since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

2 posted 2003-04-07 09:32 AM

A lovely Senryu...

write with grace, all others lose face;
"Jo was very tall, thin, ... and reminded one of a colt..." LMA

VAS
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since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

3 posted 2003-04-07 09:38 AM

so lovely, Margherita,
this can mean the object of affection is only removed by space/proximity, or he has died and you await the day of reunion

lovely, lovely

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Nan

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Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

4 posted 2003-04-07 09:41 AM

Nicely said, Margherita...

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2003-04-07 09:47 AM

Margherita
Nice, enjoyed.

NewEnglandlazurlu
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since 2002-01-04

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A Mountain Paradise

6 posted 2003-04-07 09:48 AM

Margherita, the picture is exquisite and your words are truly magnificent.

Loved it ... hugs, Marti

Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein

Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

7 posted 2003-04-08 01:07 AM

Magnificent, you write such divine poetry..thanks for sharing

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

8 posted 2003-04-08 07:41 AM

Thank you dear friends for your loving comments. The thought formed while driving in worst traffic .... how comes? .... there are priorities!
Hugs. Margherita

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

9 posted 2003-04-08 07:47 AM

This longing you express
IS the return message - Rumi

Beautiful Margherita.
Love,
Eric

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

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USA

10 posted 2003-04-08 12:49 PM

enjoyed

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

11 posted 2003-04-08 05:04 PM

A wonderful way
of looking at love's longing
a whole new light dawns...

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

12 posted 2003-04-08 05:19 PM

...and may the longing be sated ~ and soon!

Love & Light,
Linda

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

13 posted 2003-04-09 03:02 AM

Margherita:

"The story of life is quicker than the wink of an eye, the story of love is hello and goodbye. Until we meet again." - James Marshall Hendrix

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

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singapore

14 posted 2003-04-10 06:18 AM

is it elastic though? you don't want to get hurt when it snaps back

punkrockerrobin

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since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

15 posted 2003-04-10 06:28 AM

beautiful!

i am who i am and that's all that i am and all i shall ever be and if you don't like who i am then leave!

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

16 posted 2003-04-10 07:52 AM

I really enjoyed your replies, my friends. You are all beautiful.
Kaile, you made me smile! It will be a soft "collision" .... a "compenetration" ... souls are of eternal "consistence", I trust.
And continue to long for this magical meeting ...
Love to all.
Margherita

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