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In Your Poetic Mind

0 posted 2003-04-06 09:32 PM



Faded memories of time
   wrapped    in silk
of forgotten yellow fields

to awaken in dreams of peace

Of this earth:
   how strange to watch the ocean now
the mist exploding
against aging stone --
yet we drift in calmness

She calls to you in autumns
morning--
you reach as she walks toward you

dancing in her name

she is the air you breathe
      in heavens orbit
each time without regret

spread your wings and fly
in your circle of

life
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Luv you sweet friend....

you are very special!!!


Muwwwaahhhssss and HUGSSSS
Lauren~

Through the darkness
I can see your light
And you will always shine
And I can feel your heart in mine

I will remember you

© Copyright 2003 Lauren~ - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-04-06 09:59 PM


This is really a beautiful gift, Lauren. to both of you!

~Liz

Waited on a line of greens and blues, just to be the next to be with you..
~Mr. Big

Martie
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2 posted 2003-04-06 10:31 PM


Lauren--Very beautiful..I know it will make him smile.  
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3 posted 2003-04-06 11:43 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Lauren, this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, Michael is so deserving of this special dedication as he is our friend and how I long too to be able to be near the ocean each day of my life! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You Both, dearest friends, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2003-04-07 12:18 PM


How nice!
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By the sea
5 posted 2003-04-07 01:50 AM


Lauren, not only was this poem a very special gift and BIG surprise, but our friendship has always been as well.  You mean so much to me.  Thank you dearly for this, for you, and for the huge smile it brought to me.  You're precious!   Lots of love to you, sweet one.     

[This message has been edited by Auguste (04-07-2003 01:55 AM).]

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6 posted 2003-04-07 02:48 AM


beautiful poem
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7 posted 2003-04-07 04:15 AM


very precious!
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8 posted 2003-04-07 06:16 PM


Beautiful...James
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9 posted 2003-04-07 07:00 PM


enjoyed
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10 posted 2003-04-08 12:59 PM


just beautufl..what more can i say
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11 posted 2003-04-08 09:49 PM


Beautiful gift for our dear Michael, Lauren.
Absolutely beautiful.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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