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First Rush- Last Chance
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First Rush- Last Chance |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
analyize, scrutinize, hide behind your fragile walls, your guarded gate, stopped short by love again, scatter, shatter, broken hearts love trilogies, beginnnings come on endings, open door policy, merry-go-round whirl, first rush, becomesdreaded hush, come around, go around, take a chance, its a crap shoot, pay the piper, take five, bury me now, in you im alive, feel the burn, and take your turn, player, slayer, sleep with one eye open, break my heart again, i do it for the nookie, come back and dance for me, under the boardwalk, love sets a tender heart free.......... we do it time and time again.... whats the alternative? |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
hmmmmm....I guess there isn't one |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
That's a rush for you! right down to the nitty gritty! Is it just me, or is it warm in here? Maybe I should come back later....... to bump this up.  |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Its never too warm for me. Bump away baby! Thanks for the reply to all! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I still like this, and I'm true to my bump! While I'm here, I want to say in regard to M.I.A.... that we all write with our own ink, it's our link to our feelings and what makes us unique, in our own right. Hell, my shades of blue are ever changing, my wings were clipped a long time ago and a certain little birdie gives me something to hold onto. Furthermore, I've been known to dance in my own passing shadow, and in hers. Come back soon girlielocks~ I miss you too. Nice write boyo~ |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
hmmmm . . . nice write brooklyn - those words sound familiar up there . . . *wink* Bluesy - thank you nice job BB xxoo |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
"Familiar"? - I suppose that would mean that bklynboy shared "his" work before posting it? How else could it be familiar, eh? I would choose to suppose this because we all know that we don't post others' work in our own names. We surely know, too - that we wouldn't want to add detriment to causes under scrutiny... Would we? |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Sorry Nan....I dont share my work with anyone. What I write is just spur of the moment stuff. If its familiar its because I read most of the stuff written on the board and I guess some of it rubs off. I am sure if you take the time to analyze every posting...many of the contributors "stuff" would sound familiar. |
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