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Graveyard Soul
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Graveyard Soul |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space 
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Extirpate these tangled roots too many bones in graveyard pushing up and through the earth Progression tangled in relics soil tainted in reminiscence Transplantation or destruction? Do answers lie in seed? ____________________________________________________ My muse needs an @$$ kicking..ugh |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Damn Raph, you have a great and unique style, glad you decided to post this one.I am a firm advocate of beating ones muse when they won't cooperate.I beat mine daily. Jason |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
hmmmm ... I'd prefer ashes to be dispersed in the breeze ... Transformation. Seed holds miracles .... needs some caring though. Raph you are tough! Amazing thoughts! Hugs.  to brighten up the graveyard atmosphere ...Margherita |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
you are such a sweet seedling  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Aenimal - yes, I believe the answers lie in the seeds... BC |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Transplantation - yes New seedling - yes Muse a** kicking (kick - ouch ooh ouch kick . . . THERE . . ) Didnt need it anyhow but I taught her a lesson for ya . . . Stop reminiscing and start living . . . as always . . . amazing me sweety xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (04-07-2003 12:48 AM).] |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
amazing... simply amazing... Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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Laoha Member
since 2003-03-07
Posts 161Nevada, USA |
You know your words and how to arrange them, you are damn good! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
I know about those bones they haunt me still you write from the soul my friend |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Awesome piece! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Appreciate it Jason, this is quite different from the version I'd erased. Btw those last few rods you wrote, could be interpreted differentely. Margherita I wish I were tough! Thanks for the hugs can always use those Kacy thanks for the grin Bill it's extracting those answers thats the problem Sue if I could I would, too many bones to get by Thanks Kristie Laoha very kind words Dixie hope it's a good one Dreambuilder thank you for the great compliment Appreciate it Brad |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
LOL! left myself open for that one. Jason |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
That you did.. grin |
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