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Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30

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Sippin a Timmy's in London

0 posted 2003-04-06 12:05 PM

The Gentle Maple
~~~

Her battered cliffs
eroding
tell
of timeless drifts of coastal swell
As upward
rising
wholesome mist
coheres
with life's
advancing fist
~
Above
her gentle maples
frown
her autumn bliss now shades of brown
Her glory
fades
through misperceives
distortion
crushed
to rotted leaves
~
Across
the mistral'd
comber
lakes
her foehn of wistful soul awakes
In deathless hush
of dual
mistakes
the gentle maple
sighs
~~~

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-04-06 12:13 PM

You always
provide the most
amazing views...

always.

Startime55
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since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

2 posted 2003-04-06 12:14 PM

Stunning...and then spring breathes life into her and she smiles...I love your imagery....

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-04-06 12:23 PM

I really love this. I like the way you said "the gentle maple sighs". Also, the
brown color of the font really adds to the poem.

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2003-04-06 12:32 PM

"The gentle maple sighs" ~ as do I...

Lovely...

Love & Light,
EA

BSC

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since 2000-02-04

Posts 2919
New York, USA

5 posted 2003-04-06 12:34 PM

Oh what beautiful images you've brought to me with this lil' gem Rex ~ sighing along with the maples. Bonnie

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2003-04-06 01:05 PM

Your wonderful use of imagery Rex, took me there.
Very nicely done and much enjoyed!
Hope things are well in Maple City.

~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2003-04-06 01:43 PM

you always rhyme so perfectly, Rex...I enjoy your view..
hugss
M

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

8 posted 2003-04-06 02:07 PM

Rex - I just read this elsewhere hehehe - is just lovely - you bring her to life - she breathes . . . . I loved this xxoo

Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

9 posted 2003-04-06 03:41 PM

Thanks everyone ... just a few thoughts about Canada and current world events

bad little dog
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since 2000-07-08

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city pound

10 posted 2003-04-06 09:56 PM

skyshine

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since 2002-02-07

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Beneath the northern stars

11 posted 2003-04-06 10:01 PM

I love your words, Rex.

~Liz

Waited on a line of greens and blues, just to be the next to be with you..
~Mr. Big

SPIRIT
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since 2002-12-29

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California Desert

12 posted 2003-04-06 10:53 PM

Midnitesun

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Gaia

13 posted 2003-04-07 12:25 PM

I felt a cool breeze, heard a sweetly scented sad sigh. You stay away too long, Rex.

passing shadows
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displaced

14 posted 2003-04-07 04:27 AM

ooooo! just stunning!

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

15 posted 2003-04-11 01:30 PM

Rex~
Such an imagery-laden read~
Thank you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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