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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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autumn “seeking wild” raises like a wave wind-blown driftwood combs the shore Angel of Darkness April 6th 2003 [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (04-06-2003 05:41 AM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
And hows the surfing...james |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
A perfectly lovely picture of the ocean. Enjoyed the read of this Maree.  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Maree...beautiful thought here...love the short vivid picture it brings!  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And here I thought your muse was in hiding? She peeked... you looked... and listened! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Autumn is beautiful... and it's ALL yours... Trading it for spring here...  |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
*sigh* such sweet memories you bring back to me with your words....Thank you for stirring the ashes of my mind.... |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I love this form of poetry. So much said in so few words. ....and you said it beautifully. I love the beaches.  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
JamesMichael..Surfs up! Thankyou. Anne, makes me happy that you enjoyed.. thank you. Martie, thank you so much for lovely reply.  Sunshine..yep she usually is in hiding...but this time she gave me a peek. Thank you.  Nan...Autumn to me brings many wonderful memories, I love that it is an ever changing season.. so colourful.. the only problem.. winter follows. Thank you so much. Startime, glad to have brought them back (as long as they're good ones) Thank you. gary'sgirl...Thanks so much for your lovely reply and yes I love the beaches too |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like the images this left in my mind. *S* Beautiful! *S* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkAngel~ So very, very lovely ....~ And 'maybe' the title is in your reply ? 'Ever Changing Season' *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
I love the image of driftwood combing the shore. But I also love autumn at the beach so this senryu brought back fabulous memories for me. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Maree, I just love this vision dearest friend, I think in the heart of your poem lies the perfect title, this is tranquil and moving, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maree, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Maree, You have combined the two seasons perfectly in so few words. Such a nice way you have creating the visuals~ |
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