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Reflections Of the Moon

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Startime55
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0 posted 04-05-2003 03:44 PM       View Profile for Startime55   Email Startime55   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Startime55


Reflections Of The Moon

There she is...than gone...vanished
magic reflections of the moon
captured her for just an instant
Then swallowed...by waves... banished

Once carefree...shining...promoting
among starlight walking, freely
with great words from her pen, spilling
To poets...all time...devoting

Words her tool...heart said...amazing
spinning vowels into singing webs
single threads of soulís purity
The Meadow...sang loud...appraising

Here she was...not long...eternal
knowing hearts feel her presence still
as we capture words on paper
Memories...kept safely...internal

Startime
© Copyright 2003 Karen Mc Neil-Tomayer - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 04-05-2003 03:47 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

  Brava!  A wonderful entrance to Passions in Poetry!  I am so going to enjoy reading your poetry!

          Karilea - If I whisper, will you listen?...

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (04-05-2003 03:48 PM).]

Startime55
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2 posted 04-05-2003 03:50 PM       View Profile for Startime55   Email Startime55   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Startime55

Thanks...sunshine...it is me the old Startime....new computer and lost all my passwords etc. please forgive for seeming to be new. ***Hugs***
Margherita
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Eternity


3 posted 04-05-2003 03:53 PM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

This is a wonderful piece, totally after my heart. Voting.
Love, Margherita
Sunnyone
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4 posted 04-05-2003 03:58 PM       View Profile for Sunnyone   Email Sunnyone   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunnyone's Home Page   View IP for Sunnyone

Ah, it is good to have you back....and I love this piece!!!  I have a thing about the moon, you see!!  This is excellent...

[This message has been edited by Sunnyone (04-05-2003 03:59 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 04-05-2003 04:24 PM       View Profile for Mistletoe Angel   Email Mistletoe Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Mistletoe Angel's Home Page   View IP for Mistletoe Angel



Yay!!! Oh Karen, is that you? (big angel hugs) Oh Karen, it has been so long since I've read your magical Dream Weaver and Phantom and all that other wonderful poetry, now it is a delight to see you again! I hope you get to post more often now, dearest friend, I hope your jobs are going alright, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light


6 posted 04-05-2003 04:37 PM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

Welcome Startime! You certainly couldn't go wrong posting a poem about the moon! As you will discover, many of we Pipsters are mad about the moon! ---and your lovely poem about her was a "brilliant" selection!

Thoroughly enjoyed reading this delightful first post of yours!!!

Warm welcoming hugs,
Earth Angel
littlewing
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Star - Welcome to PIP!  

Memories...kept safely...internal

you got it! You will love it here . . . xxoo
Dark Angel
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8 posted 04-05-2003 05:26 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Hey Startime... I thought I recognised your monika. Welcome Back!

Thank you for this beautiful read.
vandana
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9 posted 04-05-2003 05:30 PM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vandana

welcome to passions look forward to read yours more
Midnitesun
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10 posted 04-05-2003 06:21 PM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

OMG, could it be true? are you really you, my friend from the past, the one and only original....STARTIME???
I've been wondering if you would ever return to us. You've been greatly missed, dear poet.
CLICK.. CLICK.. CLICK
see, now you cannot ever leave us, for you've been captured in 3D.


PS first line correx...shouldn't it be then, not than?

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (04-05-2003 06:22 PM).]

Sunshine
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Ah Karen...you've grown in your writing...good to see you again....
Midnitesun
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12 posted 04-05-2003 06:39 PM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

Karen, Jaime Fradera is waiting for his computer to be repaired so he can read your new post. He is a big fan of yours, so I thought I'd say hello for him tonight, and welcome back!
Startime55
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13 posted 04-05-2003 06:43 PM       View Profile for Startime55   Email Startime55   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Startime55

Tell Jamie Hi for me and BIG BIG HUGS to you both....
Enchantress
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Somewhere in time~


14 posted 04-05-2003 07:00 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

Karen! Is it really you??!!!!!!  YES!! YES!!
~Smiles, Hugs, and a vote, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Bill Charles
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15 posted 04-05-2003 07:34 PM       View Profile for Bill Charles   Email Bill Charles   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bill Charles

Startime55 - an excellent write for your first post. My vote is in...

BC
Magnus
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16 posted 04-05-2003 08:25 PM       View Profile for Magnus   Email Magnus   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Magnus

Yes,  certainly one for the books from a
lady of great words and talent.  Good to
see you.
Albert J. Allie
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17 posted 04-05-2003 11:45 PM       View Profile for Albert J. Allie   Email Albert J. Allie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Albert J. Allie

A BEAUTIFUL dedication and tearful as well.

A Wonderful write
BluesSerenade
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18 posted 04-06-2003 12:31 AM       View Profile for BluesSerenade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BluesSerenade

Safely internal, I like where you're coming from.

It's so good to see you again Startime~
I've missed reading you.  
Kethry
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19 posted 04-06-2003 01:04 AM       View Profile for Kethry   Email Kethry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kethry

New or old, it was a compelling read and a "must be" for the book
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown


garysgirl
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20 posted 04-06-2003 01:09 AM       View Profile for garysgirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit garysgirl's Home Page   View IP for garysgirl

Hello Startime,
I'm Ethel, and I came here while you were gone. It sounds like you have a lot of friends here to welcome you back. That's really good. I hope that you'll be able to stay. I really enjoyed your poem and hope to be seeing more of your poetry.

And, this is a very good book submission. You have my vote.
Hugs,
Ethel/garysgirl

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (04-06-2003 01:15 AM).]

Edder
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beautiful imagery. i thoroughly enjoyed this.
passing shadows
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22 posted 04-06-2003 05:12 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

Hey! I know you!

cool! welcome back! you see you've been missed
nakdthoughts
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23 posted 04-06-2003 08:54 AM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

oh, I thought this might be you...hugsss
who else could think of that name.

I was trying to figure out how I would know that for sure..just had to wait for you to let us know.

I have missed your writings

M
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24 posted 04-06-2003 09:15 PM       View Profile for Zinsser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Zinsser

<----   crazy about the moon   : )

great write
 
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