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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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Soul traveling A soft sweet voice from deep within filters through a myriad of sounds. A tune so new and still so familiar expands and fills me to the very edge of my perception, until I become the Tune. I am the Tune. I close my eyes, surrendering in joy. A golden pattern of rays pulls me back with unknown speed to the forever yearned for Source of the Light. I gasp, I am the Light. I am the Tune, I am the Light. I am aware of my whole spectrum of infinite colors and I travel on my greatest desire, in a moment I’m just everywhere. My particles of Light touch all Life. And I pause in awe, I am Life. I am the Tune, I am the Light, I am Life. My silent steps trace my story on a luminous white Path. In the arms of Love I dance through many Arcs of beauty and ecstasy explodes in my soul, for I have touched upon the very core of existence, Love. I am Love. I’m the Tune, I’m the Light, I’m Life, I’m LOVE. I open my eyes into the Sun, she just smiles her knowing smile. … and my soul smiles back. [This message has been edited by Sunshine (04-13-2003 07:49 PM).] |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Absolutely stunning...I was taken on a voyage of infinite beauty by your words. Thank you. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Margherita - a truly outstanding poem...you should be submitting this for the Book, you know... but for now, and until you do, I shall just pronounce this, a  ...but do let me know if you change your mind, and I shall fly back in to click in my vote....  |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Margherita this is absolutely brilliant and inspiring work, I agree with Karilea please submit this I don't think it's too late |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you for appreciating this my friends. Ok I followed your advice and submit it for the book, but it will be difficult as I have already two signed. This poem was the result of a really strong and very vivid experience, while I meditated in a park. Love, Margherita |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, please, I must add this to my treasure trove of exquisite poetry that I would love to read over and over and over... I do so identify with yours words...  Love & Eternal Light, Earth Angel |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
CLICK |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Margherita - this just left me breathless - you brought me there with you - do you know that? A journey - your words - inspire me so and your heart - it shines along with your soul . . . you are the LIGHT indeed. Good Luck - got my vote for sure . . . xxoo |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
What an inspiring journey of beauty Margherita. Love, Eric |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
How many times do we get to click? ONCE isn't going to be enough. So into my library it goes, as well as the book. This is truly beautiful, a work of fine art. Thank you for sharing this, Margherita. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Margherita, this is beautiful, sweet friend, this had me feeling as though I was flying into the light and then I was swimming with unicorns and rainbows and angels, yay! (kiss on cheek) This is a beautiful metaphysical ride, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Margherita, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
 Thank you from my heart dear friends for your loving comments. Noah here comes the unicorn ... the title is "Flight into Paradise" ...amazing: while I was contemplating this image, you just mentioned unicorns in your reply! Love to all.  Margherita |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I am glad Sunshine convinced you to submit this...beautifully done hugs M |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Margherita - another writing for the book, great write... BC |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Margherita, but you will never know until you try...i hope my vote tips the law of diminishing returns in this one's flavor...awesome read! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
FANTASTIC!! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Margherita, this, my friend, is so beautiful that I don't know what to say to express my feelings for it. I will say that I'm going to vote for it and also keep it in my library. Heart Hugs,  Ethel |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
I’m the Tune, I’m the Light, I’m Life, I’m LOVE. YES. YES YOU ARE......... Hmm what's this little box next to the brown letters? Lets see what this is for!! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you dear friends ... your loving comments are sunrays that brighten my Sunday morning! Have all a wonderful Sunday. Love, Margherita |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh my of course this needs to be in the book! Absolutely breathtaking even without the graphic my dear lady. It is honor to vote. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
This is so beautiful, this is a must for the book! Take care, Melissa |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Margherita: I loved this! What a beautiful experience for you and for us who have now read your poem. I am voting for it! Betty Lou Hebert |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Remarkable meditative prayer of spirituality...yes... |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Add my vote for this beautiful, imaginative poetry. Hold the book covers open for this one. Joyce |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Margherita You have my vote. |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Absolutely marvellous - happy to vote for this. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
bump |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
So inspiring and uplifting , song from the soul in sweet harmony Hope |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
so inspiring and uplifting , song from the soul in sweet harmony Hope |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wow, thank you my friends for your loving replies and votes! I am touched. ... and honored for you are all such great poets here! Love, Margherita |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
I think there is an echo in here. Or is it just Hope S? LOL This is a wonderful write and worthy of publication in our book. Here's my vote. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh I love this.. and I want to be there! You have my vote  Maree. |
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Poet4Christ Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 211Oklahoma City |
bump and a vote... very good He that trusteth in his own heart is a fool: but whoso walketh wisely, he shall be delivered. Proverbs 28:26 |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Beautiful, and soul touching! Vote! |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I LOVE THIS voting ( and saving in my library) |
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Street Heart Member
since 2002-09-05
Posts 349Pennsylvania,USA |
Very,very beautiful and inspiring.Wonderful offering,Margherita! You have my vote for this! Hope to see it in the book. Peace,Geoffrey If a man has not discovered something he is willing to die for,his life is not worth living. |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very very beautiful! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
*bump* I needed a lift . . . |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Wow!  Wonderful! *click* |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Margherita, I am now voting for your most marvelous spirit journey and your poem... -Bob |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You have all touched my heart dear friends by appreciating and voting for my "Soul traveling". It was an exquisite experience and I am so happy to share these feelings with you all. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wow, the poem made it to be included in Reflections! I am really happy. Many thanks to each of you for your appreciation and for your votes! I wish all of you success with your book submissions and above all in your lives. May your talents be recognized and rewarded! Much love, Margherita |
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