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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-04-06 02:36 PM



Some days
Inside myself
A smile begins working
Rising its way to the surface
Trying to cover the hurt and/or pain
Of empty words, that can cut deep, wounding
Leaving behind the scars to heal
A spirit in need of
Understanding
Some Days

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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1 posted 2003-04-06 02:43 PM


Some days..I read things like this..and just sit
nodding my head..in understanding.
Well done Maureen.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Rex Allen McCoy
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2 posted 2003-04-06 02:56 PM


Maureen ... hope your days fill with smiles

you have a lot of patience to write these more difficult pieces

passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-04-06 02:56 PM



nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2003-04-06 03:01 PM


thank you Nancy

Good afternoon Rex, I am positioned here for a bit, leaving other chores in wait, wanting to catch up with my responding and sometimes the mood strikes and forces me to post and why not try a rictometer...at least it challenges me. How about you

Dixie, thank you. hugss
M

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5 posted 2003-04-06 03:12 PM


Ah someday ~ Beautiful little gem ~ nicely done ~ Bonnie
nakdthoughts
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6 posted 2003-04-06 07:15 PM


Hi Bonnie, *s  thanks, nice to see you. I am making a New York Cheesecake at the moment...at least that is what the recipe says. My sweet tooth is acting up.

Smells delicious...

M

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