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OLIAS
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0 posted 2003-04-04 03:36 PM


Flamenco

Castanets clicking in pure synchronicity
Making my heart miss a beat,
Silk covered bodies defying all gravity
Black-tooled leather clad feet,
Spinning abandon in rhythmic totality
Frantically cascading strings,
Poised in defiant dynamic vivacity
Fiery Flamenco is King!

Olias



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Midnitesun
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1 posted 2003-04-04 03:42 PM


Well, my feet are moving now. Nice rhythm!
wranx
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2 posted 2003-04-05 12:28 PM


Should be read with the rhythmic clapping of Flamenco...nicely done
Sunnyone
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3 posted 2003-04-05 07:39 AM


OLE!!!!  You have my gypsy feet dancing to this one...feels good too!!!  

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

OLIAS
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4 posted 2003-04-05 01:11 PM


Midnitesun:

Thank you for your kind reply.

Wranx:

I'm so glad you enjoyed.

Sunnyone:

Thers's nothing like a good dance, thanks for your reply.

Regards and many thanks to everyone,

Take care,
Olias.

Midnitesun
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5 posted 2003-04-05 07:10 PM


again, hello, and so glad to have you posting again, Olias.
Even though I'm listening to Satriani right this moment (Chords of Life) I decided it was time to bump your poem back up to the top, and hope that others see this beautiful piece you've gifted us. Thanks!

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (04-05-2003 11:42 PM).]

Startime55
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6 posted 2003-04-05 07:17 PM


Stunning....makes the feet want to keep time to the heart....love it...
JamesMichael
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7 posted 2003-04-06 05:38 AM


Enjoyed...James
OLIAS
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8 posted 2003-04-07 12:03 PM


Midnitesun:
Hi Again, and thank you, ah Satriani I think I'm having a mystical potato head groove thing right now lol. Thanks once again and take care.

Startime55:
I am so glad you enjoyed, thank you for replying.

JamesMichael:
Thank you sir, be well.

Regards to all,
Olias.

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